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Join date : 2009-07-05
Age : 24
Location : USA

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Character Bio: Art of healing.

PostSubject: Only A Half   Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:05 pm

She was half
and found her whole.
He completed her
heart and soul.
She fell in love
and thought it'd last.
But soon his feelings
were left in the past.
Crying her heart out
day and night.
She thought everything
would be all right.
But nothing was
ever the same.
The pain and tears
still came.
She's now lost her
smile and laugh.
And soon she realized
she was yet another half.

I wrote this when I was like 13. Three years ago! =o
And it's the only poem I've written that I actually memorized.

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Join date : 2009-07-10
Age : 24
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PostSubject: Re: Only A Half   Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:57 am

impressive work ms. bou...the structure is like my previous literary piece did not use high-fallutin words, but then its still touching in a way, i think the poem will be more expressive if you add more stanzas...keep up the good work.

You are more beautiful when drenched with blood.
Now my feet won't touch the ground.
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PostSubject: Re: Only A Half   Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:26 pm

Thank you for your comment!

I always think my poems aren't good :/

So it's nice to know some people think they are. x]

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Age : 24
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PostSubject: Re: Only A Half   Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:15 pm

I think it is a great poem and I remember it you wrote this poem in my notebook.

Noble and true, you are the hero other heroes aspire to be. You are a natural leader, selfless and kind, who will put the lives of others above your own, and are steadfast in your pursuit of justice.
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Age : 19
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PostSubject: Re: Only A Half   Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:20 am

heart with frost
a man lost
boy being bossed around

no one here
drinking beer
though lifes
not to last

for man cannot
suceed cannot
live and cannot last
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